That Which Occupies Space Comments

I really like the play on words. Between 3 phases of matter. Very artistic and creative I love reading poetry like this. You could curtail it a little BUT I realize in this writting style that it isn't as much redundant as it is reemphasizing a point through the play on words. Where other poets would try to write out a poem in this style and would have it come off as having a bit of dead wood this poem actually does the opposite showing the depths of your writting ability down through your demonstration here. Also the title is clever as well almost forgot to mention that lol. Kudos Donnie.

Such a cool poem. Wow, I enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks!

Loved the last 3 lines There are those few times That to another It's the only thing that matters. Words are powerful tool.....deeply though out