Friday, March 7, 2008

That Which Is Forbidden From The View Of An Insomniac Comments

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In the dark hours, my head over sized and thick
thinking my neck would be crushed under its weight I dared not
a glance behind me, afraid I'd hear the snap and then
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Eloisa Gearhart
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Goldy Locks 07 March 2008

So exciting, Eloisa! ! Gripping language. Confident, yet vulnerable. Totally relatable. love the dash of quotes thrown in - - sands it with a conversational feel. keep on, sjg

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