Monday, November 6, 2006

That Weird Street At Night Comments

Rating: 4.5

Just like Christmas lights
The street lights turn on and off every second
The night guard of the bank has fallen asleep
Hiding his eyes behind those big eyeglasses of his
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Peter A. Crowther 20 November 2006

Nice graphic poem; it reads like a dream sequence and it neatly ends with a dream. Am not sure if I'd like to ride my bike down that street though with guys driving cars without lights :)

0 0 Reply
Yodit Mussie 14 November 2006

u wrote a great poem and its very good too. so keep on writting ok. u have a good.......... u know its me judy

0 0 Reply
Konjit Berhane

Konjit Berhane

a S M a R a
Close
Error Success