Sunday, October 2, 2005

That Was Her Comments

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She had blue questionmarks
coming out of her blue eyes.
Her lips were too blue for kissing
and a blue-tongue lizard was her pet.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 02 October 2005

Nice! I offer this one suggestion: Halloween approaches. A costumed lizard, blue in color, could do the trick. L

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Allan James Saywell 02 October 2005

this is a piece of poetry that i spent ten minutes reading herbert only because i wanted to get it right, i read three things into it and if i was wrong it doesn't matter i felt a touch of sadness and unrequited rejection and a sense of loss and a great deal of love whatever the outcome Warm regards allan

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