That Was Childhood Comments
Better was life then as burden was less,
no desires to fulfill and no dreams to chase,
small were the wounds that we did face,
life seemed to be game then but never a race..
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A nice try dear Sonali, You are extremely lyrical. I guess you are one of the most beautiful poets in the formative days. I visualize beauty, sensitivity and ecstasy all culminating as one entity- that is you. Felt like falling in love with your My Adorable Friend. Frankly speaking, if you don't mind, I felt jealous of Him.
thank you so very much sir..... the person for whom it was written really possesses a very adorable personality... thank you for your appreciation again sir.....
I love this poem. I'm just writing a poem about a childhood dream myself. I don't think it will be as good as yours!
thank you sir for your appreciation which always serves the role of encouragement...... i would wait eagerly to read your dreams of childhood....
Childhood ia very special in our memories. Well crafted
Hi sonali, your poem That was child hood is good and easily understandable poem. I like it. It has the power to remind everybody their own childhood. thanks. wish you all the success.
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7/25/2025 10:31:16 AM # 1.0.0
childhood was the best time and beyond words to express...a child lives in world of perfect happiness and bliss. There is no greater joy in ones life in phases better than his/her childhood. An endearing composition. Liked it.