That Unknown Girl Comments

Simply beautiful! Again i loved it. Great job, keep it up!

wonderful lines, true feelings I like it dear Rohan keep writing.....

Beautiful poem, you tell a story that keeps the reader enchanted. It makes you want to know who is the unknown girl is. I like this and thought about it after. Keep writing please.

Honestly, I started tearing up at the last lines. Really quite beautiful, like a passing dream that stays with you long after you've awoken, and haunts your daylight hours...