Whose that girl standing out there?
Where is she from?
alone she stands
i can see neither her dad nor her mom
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wonderful lines, true feelings I like it dear Rohan keep writing.....
Beautiful poem, you tell a story that keeps the reader enchanted. It makes you want to know who is the unknown girl is. I like this and thought about it after. Keep writing please.
Honestly, I started tearing up at the last lines. Really quite beautiful, like a passing dream that stays with you long after you've awoken, and haunts your daylight hours...
Simply beautiful! Again i loved it. Great job, keep it up!