That Two Must Share The Sky Comments

Such an enjoyable dance with rhyme and heaven's reason... I delight in dancing with you! If only in your words.

This is a beautiful poem, with an attractive title and a short, sweet note. 'Attention' s thief, deliberate glare Prominent perch, fancied fare'...Oh! How beautifully you said that! 'Strung against the onyx vast Where poet's, prophets, lines are cast Dangles deaf, unspoken strength Stretched across midnight' s length'...So poetic! 'Shimmer, soft and full of grace That two must share the sky And space.... ' Some instant thoughts so beautifully portrayed! Well done!