Friday, August 31, 2018

That Twenty-One Comments

Rating: 5.0

the yellow bird is back to the tranquil meadow where my soul finds true repose,
she didn't leave me....
I speak to her every day,
she tweets back with glee!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Unnikrishnan E S 22 August 2019

Hi Malabika, At twenty one, you have springs on our feet and Spring in our heart

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Ratnamala 12 September 2018

Dream is travelling to far away place with the bird, very romantic....1010

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Thank you. Glad you liked the romantic element!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 September 2018

Malabika, such a heartwarming write...........................

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 01 September 2018

Thanks, Bernard. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the rating too!

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