Tuesday, June 9, 2009

That Thunder Stormy Night With You Comments

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We Lay there,
In your Bed,
Wide Eyed Listening to the Rain Hammer down.
As the thunder claps,
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Rosalita Fern
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Stephen Stirk 09 June 2009

A great poem. Eroticism at its best. I like the way you interweave with the storm. This is a clever poem Best Steve

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Marieta Maglas 09 June 2009

nice control of vocab/nice theme too

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