Monday, April 21, 2014

That Summer Night Comments

Rating: 4.8

I couldn't help but rivet my eyes
on your erect boobs and well shaped hips,
Noticing how your snow-white dress Clung on you
As you walked towards me.
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 27 November 2017

Lovely love poem, well articulated, narrated..... ....... It was to smile happily up to my shadowed face.... Like it

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 April 2018

I thank you Sir.

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Goodman Hope 20 May 2014

Lol... yeah I like this poem Mr

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Unwritten Soul 23 April 2014

Agreed with Valsa, she interprete it very precisely..._Soul

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Valsa George 22 April 2014

A heightened moment of cosummation with all sensuous details....! ! Great diction in vivid imagery! ! But it should have been a winter night.....!

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