Tuesday, August 11, 2020

That Sudden Shake....! Comments

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there was all of a sudden
the evening breeze,
I started to dance and waving
like the elegant trees
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 August 2020

A sudden shake is all it takes to make you awake. Be glad it wasn't an earthquake!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2020

Sometimes sweet dreams motivate mind with greater force. But sudden shake brings break here and you wake up and see another reality around. Evening breeze waves towards elegant trees. You still sing and dance with greater joy. This poem is very brilliantly penned with much beauty...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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