That Strange Child Comments

crosses the dimensional walls we put up out of our fears... there is life beyond what we allow. good poem, thought provoking!

that's pretty good, apart from the deeper meaning relayed through your words, the words themselves flow nicely together with a few well placed natural breaks. I keep rereading the first line of the second stanza; it's quite heavy. good job.

I hope you are painting how absurd is the life of a fatherless uncared child in the society. Complex problems of life leads to strange ways.it makes one think about deep problems of the society.Marks 10

Those that are strange are more often described as brilliant behind closed doors. Beautiful writing, as usual.