Wednesday, February 20, 2019

That Special Glow Comments

Rating: 5.0

When people look at him and me,
They think we are a pair
But things are not as they appear,
And life is so unfair.
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Louis Rams 22 February 2019

a very well written poem and an eye opener

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Practicing Poetess 23 February 2019

Thank you, Louis. 'Well written', coming from you, is a high compliment! : -)

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Kostas Lagos 22 February 2019

Complicated personal relationships! The human drama presented perfectly!

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Practicing Poetess 22 February 2019

LOL Kostas, you nailed it! An oldie classic rock song by Crosby, Stills & Nash had the words 'And if you can't be with the one you love, Love the one you're with.' But it isn't always that easy. (A YouTube commenter wrote: 'Quite possibly the worst advice ever given in a song! ') Thank you for your on-point comment!

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Carl Roussell 21 February 2019

Nothing and no one can replace real love, a good write and a 10

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Practicing Poetess 21 February 2019

Thanks, Carl. Only those who have truly loved, recognise this. You simply cannot make yourself love someone that you do not love!

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Prabir Gayen 20 February 2019

While he is just a friend. I don't know what else I can do To make you see the light I'm sad and lonely, and I'm blue All day, and every night....10+++++++++++++++++++++

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Practicing Poetess 21 February 2019

Thanks so much for rating, Prabir! Much appreciated! : -)

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Prabir Gayen 20 February 2019

Concluding part is more beautiful..... At best, he's a poor substitute That's all he'll ever be. We need the hugs we used to share, The joy of you and me.....thanks dear poetess ❤

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Practicing Poetess 21 February 2019

Prabir, thank you for your appreciation, and for the little heart!

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Prabir Gayen 20 February 2019

I'm only passing time with him I think you ought to know That you're the man who causes me To feel that special glow And I won't let him hold my hand Or hug or kiss me, so I need us like we were before, So I can let him go..... Let him go is a maturity...fine poetry

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Practicing Poetess 21 February 2019

Thank you, Prabir. I think that not being with him in the first place, would be the greater maturity!

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