Tuesday, October 30, 2018

That Smile Comments

Rating: 4.7

When the blood-red heart wails in heavy rain

The crisscross of her face glistens with an intriguing smile.
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Partha Pratim Goswami
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Sarah Persson 30 October 2018

I find her shining there, alone, up in a darkened sky Yet, astounded to realize that she's actually burning. Lovely words, a stunning poem, well done

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Partha 30 October 2018

Thanks sir for your kind compliments

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Dave Walker 30 October 2018

Love and life go together hand in hand. A great poem.

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