Wednesday, August 19, 2009

That Shiny City In The Future Comments

Rating: 4.8

Imagine a city,
Filled of gems and luxury.
Death does not exist.
Sickness, again won’t moist.
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Obed dela Cruz
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Christina Phan 27 August 2009

Fanastic poem very put and thought kept it up

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Joseph Poewhit 20 August 2009

Heaven is a reality--

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 20 August 2009

Wow, I've read all of yours, and I think this is the best! !

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Rajaram Ramachandran 20 August 2009

You have created a dream world, another heaven of your own.

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Mubeen Sadhika 20 August 2009

Nice. Well thought. Beautiful.

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