Friday, October 16, 2009

That's You, My Dearest Friend …! Comments

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That's you, My Dearest Friend…!
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Is this the way my life should be,
As it has ever been with me;
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AnanthaKumar SUBRAMONY
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2009

Like a bird, that's been just shot down, My dreams were broken, and spattered down, Brittle was my heart, had it ever been left free, But, wasn't it safely caught, by a hand that I could see? ! it is well expressed thoughts and beautifullyinterwoven with words.. i liked it... good piece....10 read any of my poems from the section

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Anusha Subramanian 16 October 2009

Wow.. a fantastic piece of poetry.. When u are here, Why shoul I fear? ? ! ! Great work.. Lovely poem.. Seriously, the words are few to express you! ! ! ..10

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