A day without u is like a day without its sunshine
If I had a flower for every time I think about u
Then my life will turn to be a forever garden
when I see flowers grow, and the sky is blue
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A well articulated love poem penned from the inner recesses of the heart. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Well, I'm not crazy about the spelling mistakes, but other than that it's not bad.
Wow the heart is like a camera it will keep those special memories alive...thanks for such wonderful poems...
U may be out of my sight, but never out of my mind I just 've look in my heart cuz that’s where I find u This is so cute and simply beautiful... the lines reflect the love and true feeling of missing someone... keep writing like this
Hey :) I'm glad you PM'd me. This is a beautiful poem! It connects deeply to me, though I know you weren't writing it for me. Just had a little thing with the you's being 'u', but those can be ignored easily. :) keep it up!
Where you are right now, I was many times before but I learned the heart and painful ways my lesson and like I said in my poem titled: IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, I learned that whenever there is an ending there is a new beginning and what I thought was a great loss turned out to be a blessing from the sky! Love and Peace for always! ...
When you miss someone its always like the sun has taken back some of its sunlight :) Rated 10 :)
A very beautiful love poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing.