Tuesday, October 21, 2014
That's Why I'M Afraid Comments
Rating: ★5.0
If this is a wind
like rubbish whirl,
it will take all the
smelly things to make
...
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Neela Nath Das
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8/12/2025 11:58:03 PM # 1.0.0
Afraid you might fall for the lines of A man untrue only to realize it was all rubbish. That is what I got out of it. I really like how you worded this poem and he it gets right to the point but makes you ponder what you mean for a bit. I love poems that make you think. Also just my opinion in the second line if you deleted the word A and wrote it like... If this is a wind of rubbish whirl, it might sound better. It's great either way but when I read it which was like 4 times I kept finding myself removing the A from the second line.