That's What People Do Comments

I was down in the river In came the flood Swimming my hardest After all that's what people do. In the land of treachery and lies. They said that time will heal it And the things I cannot undo i feel guilty. Let's try to sleep through this pain, These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations and the brilliance of your mind. You are using symbols. I took the falling down in the river as a symbol, guilt, cogitation afterwards. What shall i do. and your conclusion that is what people do. Very good poets use symbols always. we understand it only when we read a poem very carefully. I did it for you. Thank you for asking me to read it. Thank you. tony

That's the thing one can do when all things go beyond limit! Keep it up!