Sunday, August 3, 2014

That's My World Comments

Rating: 5.0

An ocean of blood.
That's my World.
An effort to swim,
The vision growing dim
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Ayesha Tulkubra
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Abhishek Tiwari 03 August 2014

waooo.. Waooo. Waoooo... Thats ummm... Am falling short of words... Its Extremly beautiful poem... Once i slipped into ur poem.. I found myself immediately swept across it and into the end... It was like a marry-go-round flow... And waoo what an imaginative intervention into the nerves that thrills from within... Double thumbs up! ! !

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