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nice carry on.......

Aditya...if I may say, having read a number of poets & their writings (which unfortunately borders on poetic phraseology) , I have for the first time read a poem that I can applaud. Wonderful continuity of thought & for most part you have not missed the rhyme - which is the toughest part to sustain in a poem. Kudos my friend. A 10/10.

nice imagery i like the contents well written