You say life is a passing show,
I say life is still in its teens,
Enjoy it as much as you can,
You are a pessimist,
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Romantic write and thrilling expression. The poems ends in an amusing dance like........Suddenly the clouds start their dance, The pleasant wind then sings sweetly, The naughty moon half hidden in the clouds, Aroma of Jasmines and Queen of Night Smiles of nature envelope the earth, That's how nature approves their love! ........... Marvellous poem.....10
Your poetry is always so visual and romantic. You are a young man at heart, my friend.
Wonderful Poem...............Inspiring and intimidating...........Loved it.
Very Romantic..... you are young enough to have another round of dance! Though your sweet heart is fatigued, your spirited persuasion will fill her with fresh energy and she will also join you in a wonderful waltz! Enjoyed the poem!