Tuesday, September 8, 2020

That's All.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Was it unfaithful time?
Or were you
Or was it my destiny?
That's all that happened
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Shakira Nandini
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Kostas Lagos 09 September 2020

Questions from a broken heart.Well written!

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Hannington Mumo 08 September 2020

An engagingly incisive piece on the immeasurably hurtful subject of estrangement and loss of love - twin heart-rending thorns only fully knowable by the actual, ever-seething victim they pierce. You wholly merit my honest 10/10, sweet-spinning Shakira!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 September 2020

unloved destiny sadly

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Deluke Muwanigwa 08 September 2020

Nice short and sad. Sometimes separation is the only solution. Thats all

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