i was walking in the snow
nothing or anything had green
the trees were bear
the water was frozeen
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Tom, this is a lovely poem with a very sweet sentiment - you write with a real poet's eye.
The image of a red poppy against white snow is great! It brings on other thoughts re 'connotations' of words ie red makes you think of passion; white of purity, calm, death etc. There are lots of things that come in to a reader's mind associated with these words. The imagery of this poem really works.