Sunday, June 7, 2009

That Poor Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

She's been abandoned,
she's been abused,
in so many different ways.
Yet she wants to find love,
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Evaughn Gray 17 June 2009

This is a beautiful piece. So many women have been through this, and still haven't let it cross thier lips. Really great poem you have here, your a really great poet! ~ Hazel G.E

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Tyrone Wingfield 17 June 2009

This poem is no less than spectacular, Ive felt and have watched so many otheres feel exactly what you have written that its a wonder we havent found eacher other yet, you are truley an amazing poet

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Kevin Fisher 17 June 2009

I love the pain involved in this so much dark emotions I love it keep up the great work doom

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Darkness Everywhere 09 June 2009

i really like this poem it leaves a lot of questions unanswered. keep it up 10+

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i like this poem a LOT! ! ! i especially like the way its wriiten in a combination of broken phrases and complete sentances. shows the pain and suffering of that poor child.....me likeses muches.

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that poor child has a rich soul. n a fantastic heart.., fixed with a courageous will.. she'd make it! I believe

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bravo lady d and andrea... this is a very sad and touching piece... my heart goes out to that girl... thanks for sharing, i give this a 10.

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