Thursday, December 18, 2008

That Past Day.......... Comments

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That past day, when i remember
Sometimes brings tears in eyes
Sometimes make me happy
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Pramod Kumar
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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 26 July 2009

Awesomely written..you've penned it well...XOXO

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Elizabeth Douglas 17 June 2009

sounds really sad and you heartbroken.....good mood and effects

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Lucero Flores 13 June 2009

Beautiful Peom, I enjoy reading that peom. That is how I have bin feeling sadly, Very good, hopefully you have a new peom soon i would love to know what you have to write about soon!

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Lady Grace 13 June 2009

those were the memories of yesterdays.a beautiful poem.keep writing..grace

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Rudy Hossam 04 January 2009

Very sweet...how u descibed the days with her...hope u get back together

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 21 December 2008

wow supperb feeling yaar...lovely and very cute one...... keep writing

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brittany 19 December 2008

very sweet......... i love it. good job with it and post some more! nice job!

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Raindreamer Hippy 18 December 2008

Very deep and passionate! I love it!

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*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

That past day, reminds me of Her sweet kisses in trembling lips, Her strong hugs with closing eyes, Her warm breaths. this is passionate and very cute I like it a lot. yes written very well. good job. Becca

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