That past day, when i remember
Sometimes brings tears in eyes
Sometimes make me happy
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sounds really sad and you heartbroken.....good mood and effects
Beautiful Peom, I enjoy reading that peom. That is how I have bin feeling sadly, Very good, hopefully you have a new peom soon i would love to know what you have to write about soon!
those were the memories of yesterdays.a beautiful poem.keep writing..grace
Very sweet...how u descibed the days with her...hope u get back together
wow supperb feeling yaar...lovely and very cute one...... keep writing
very sweet......... i love it. good job with it and post some more! nice job!
That past day, reminds me of Her sweet kisses in trembling lips, Her strong hugs with closing eyes, Her warm breaths. this is passionate and very cute I like it a lot. yes written very well. good job. Becca
Awesomely written..you've penned it well...XOXO