Thursday, August 4, 2016

That Open Gate Comments

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The path led through an open gate
New fresh pastures there to find.
Just a few steps were needed now,
To leave the sad past behind.
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Ernestine Northover
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Sachidananda Panda 27 June 2019

An unknown future awaited, My intrepid heart's desire. To face a bright new tomorrow, And set my old world on fire." Beautifu..! Dear poet.. liked it most.. Thanks.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 June 2019

Write comment. Such a beautiful image, Ernestine. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chuck Audette 22 October 2017

And sometimes we have no way to return to our original pasture, alas.

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Paul Butters 04 August 2016

We find the same thing when we cross The Pennines from Yorkshire into Lancashire, Ernestine. ha ha

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