Monday, October 17, 2005

That One Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

With wide open eyes, she looked at me,
And climbing up, upon my knee,
Gave me a kiss, which touched my heart
And launched a pain, as if a dart
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Ernestine Northover
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Just wonderful! It reminds me of the line 'give me a kiss to build a dream on'. No, we are not old, just eternal souls who have found another kind of lingering love....Karin Anderson

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Bonnie Harding 18 July 2007

anyone with a heart and a child can relate....

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Duncan Wyllie 31 March 2006

I don't think that your soul is old Ernestine I think that it is ageless and that is why I find this connection with another so beautiful and essential.God Bless you and your family.Love Duncan

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Esther Leclerc 25 February 2006

Goes to the soul of anyone who has loved a little one... Thank you for sharing this beauty!

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 18 October 2005

Very nice...that kiss just jumps off the page.

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Keiah Delu 17 October 2005

Gosh I felt that kiss...lol...good job! !

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Mary Nagy 17 October 2005

This is very sweet Ernestine. So nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Theorem Thetruthserum 17 October 2005

Nice romantic poem that flows really well.

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