Monday, October 31, 2016

That Old Woman Comments

Rating: 4.3

I loved my eyes, I still love them,
they chose a girl among so many girls.
I asked my eyes as to why they chose that girl.
My eyes smiled and replied,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dipankar Sadhukhan 05 November 2016

An excellent piece of poetry. True love never fades. With the passing of time it becomes sweeter. It glitters in the sky of one's heart till the last Day.10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 November 2016

How sweet! Akhtar Sahab! This poem is a master piece! True love is beyond and superior to the peripheral game of the sense organs. Loved reading it! .100+++

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Savita Tyagi 02 November 2016

Absolutely beautiful poem of true love going stronger with each passing day. May God bless you both.

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Kelly Kurt 01 November 2016

Absolutely beautiful, my friend!

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Valsa George 01 November 2016

This is an exquisitely crafted poem, declaring in unwavering voice your love for your beloved....! I understand that it has ripened with the ripening years and she, so sure, is thrilled o see this poem! !

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 November 2016

An amazing poem....................................

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