Thursday, December 2, 2010

That Old Red Barn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our mind it shall play tricks on us
in a welcome and tantalizing way
the lucky passers-bye who can see
a vision of ourselves playing in the hey
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Edwin Baldwin
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Joseph Anderson 30 June 2012

A beauty of a poem about a place I shall always remember. Great nostalgia, Thank you for mentioning me

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Pranab K Chakraborty 11 December 2010

It would appear that we have been here before in such a place where the dark grows darkest and bright light filters in between the cracks guiding ones foot steps that could not resist... No comment, just universal these lines I quote here again as the human wisdom which man can touch such height to feel the life, other animals perhaps can't. Unresistable steps of poetic beauty a poet keeps behind for the readers. Beautiful. Regards, pranab 10+++

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