Thursday, April 23, 2009

That Old Moon Comments

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That old moon keeps shining down
Upon this troubled world;
Generations come and go
And a new flag is unfurled,
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Brenda Tamayo 23 April 2009

Very beautiful poem. Do you think 'And all those kinds of things' would sound better than 'And all that kind of thing'? Just a suggestion.

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