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An emotional ballad written in free verse. Well done.

I pignant love story from the hand of a loved soul atleast you gav and got back love well WOnderful poem.

Beautiful and well expressed poem. Touching story Enjoyed reading it

I have always tried to imagine what is beyond the sentence ‘Then, they lived happily ever after.” You reverse the story so that before becomes an after and this sentence seems to be charged with a new refreshed meaning ‘Then, they live happily ever after.”...amen

its a touching story. Nicely penned.

its lovely.. i felt as if first i ws on one mountain then slipped into a valley of self pity n then rose again to full height of another mountain.. :)

Very beautiful & touching poem! thankx for sharing.10

beautiful! ! ! i really liked this one too! full of expression. but now i see why you only have a few poems, because they're all so long! lol

touching..... so natural.....very good aaryaan..... i was quite moved and i wanted to sign in and give my comments..... its difficult to write what i felt while reading.......' there is life in it'... ' there is love in it'.

Such a beautiful written ballad here...I had a wonderful read...heartfelt and words flow like a stream...10+++

wonderful ballad, well written..............10++++

Beautiful! I had to log in to vote on this poem. One of the most wonderful things I've read in a long time. Regards, Leria

longg and soulful...........

wonderful ballad worth reading 10

A sad short story than a poem...I have no words to comment other than 'very touching'....regards-Indira Renganathan