That Night Comments

That night, in a strange place. A fly realizes this very interestingly. Reminding one of medieval haunted castles is amazing and this provokes thought. Two figures leaning as we are noticing.To curl up in the warmth of hope we again hope certainly. This is an excellent poem wisely penned and shared....10

In that unearthly hour An eerie fear gripped me And how my mind longed To slither out of that hole To curl up in the warmth of my home Far… far away! A beautiful impressive poem.................10

Wonderful elaboration of a scary night. Don't know whether an experience or imagery, but truth is - we live with all these unwanted happenings....... a nice penning

Like living in a dream and falling down to earth. A story told about living in a dark and dreary place. Thinking all about the horrible things that happens and wanting to be over with them. Don't despair things will get better and the light will come soon. Very good and imaginative.

Wonderful poem. Feeling of fear and eerie ness of strange place! A melodrama word by word! It's a pleasure to read your poems.

The magnificent atom of reality in your wording as they come together in similar code, makes it more real that one can imagine. Most intriguing poem ma'am.

This feels like you are describing something that actually happened. Or a weaving of an experience with creativity. And the writing of it will release you from it.

Beautiful write on scary night, presented with wonderful delight......Loved it.

a really nice poem..

Very nice poem which I translated in Tamil.

an eerie tale crafted in the background of night giving the readers a feeling of living through it. very well done.

.... how wndrfully you wrote this one.... it felt as if i could see everything that was happening... like your narating skills..

a scary night but with a safe conclusion of returning to our nest where we find peace and solace.....a good write Mam

You have depicted your fear and predicament so realistically in this poem that I felt as if I was watching the scene myself. The last stanza is brilliant!

A human is prisoner of mental illusions/dreams. Your poem brings home this fact poetically in a well composed metaphorical poem. It also brings out various emotions while creating beautiful imagery. Last few lines are catchy and shows the longing to return to the real world..

The scene painted here is rich with colours dark and your pen is sharp But surely you shouldn`t have gone there to feel that night. Be at home during nights strange and Be safe there with your near one/s. Am I joking? A fine write madam Valsa..

Night in a strange place, a scary experience indeed. Way to solve it is to imagine being at home. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

Captivating Valsa, to me... You were right there. Well done

wonderful creation, thanks.

the same insecurity dat we feel... great poem mam