Tuesday, January 17, 2006
That Night Comments
Rating: ★0.0
It's becoming more evident.
Much more obvious to me.
That you liked it.
An you thought i did to.
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7/30/2025 3:59:51 PM # 1.0.0
You write your emotions in raw form. I like that, it's unpretentious. However, I think your writing could afford a second pass, touch it up, cut out redundancies here, expand an idea there, and fix the spelling. Good start, I like the honesty in your writing.