Sunday, June 12, 2011

That Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the early morn,
We hear the horn.
And as we rise,
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Jason Pack
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Alex Medina 06 May 2012

This is a FANTASTIC poem! I always loved medieval battles and magic; that kind of stuff. The way you kept each stanza short and still kept the imagery and story going is amazing. You are, by far, one of the best poets I've heard of.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 June 2011

Nice poem. Full of great sentiments. The poem is rich in imagery and style. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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