Monday, July 30, 2018

That Naughty Word Comments

Rating: 5.0

that naughty word
prancing in my mind
doing the bamboo dance
lifting its legs in the nick of time
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COMMENTS
Thomas Kane 11 November 2018

perhaps, it left me intrigued and aroused ever so slightly. Captures an audience and I think all can relate to this word... I like it

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Aditi Ray 12 November 2018

Thank you Tommy :)

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Dev Anand 10 November 2018

that naughty word prancing in my mind doing the bamboo dance lifting its legs in the nick of time as I close the poles to snare it.. oh this stanzaattracted me. the descrption of the word that escapes us always. to think of that and write about it is in itself creative poetry

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 November 2018

there is no word beyond love which can encompass the whole world whenever one is in juxtaposition a word all have so many times heard it's on my lips they say what is it but love any way @ 45 u look so young and bright I wonder what the word would have been when one was @16 lovey imagery you leave the word out only none can believe 'tis LOVE ONLY READ my moms smiles please

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Crayon Poet 14 August 2018

I ask myself what it can be - this held me close from start to finish.

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Aditi Ray 10 November 2018

hi :) it is not any particular word... the poem is a description of how we feel when we try to get the right word to express what we want. the word seems within grasp but always eludes us.

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Crayon Poet 28 November 2018

Hi to you, and thnx for the explanation, Aditi :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 July 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Aditi r. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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