Thursday, October 25, 2012

That Melted Ice-Cream... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw her eyes,
That day,
Deep,
Drowning in emotions,
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Vikrant Jog
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Vijay Sai R 18 December 2012

this poem is so refreshing...as cool as an ice cream

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Hazel Durham 03 November 2012

Beautiful with great imagery, loved this poem!

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Unwritten Soul 02 November 2012

Ah..this write such a simple, straight, easy to bind head, really relax...i like the way you play with your freedom, free in the air with emotions, i truly enjoyed this! ! _Soul

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Neela Nath Das 02 November 2012

Very nice Vikrant.Down to memory lane, the fractions come like this.

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Asif Andalib 02 November 2012

Nice work. I have enjoyed reading it

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Antonio Liao 30 October 2012

a wishful pattern of each beloved, like dreaming of something that comes within the heart, a little way of saying...please stay... i love to read it 10/10

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Vikrant Jog 29 October 2012

Agree Aung... Now what I can say is work is in progress... Thank You mate

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Yash Shinde 29 October 2012

very lovely..........a bit of imagery..............great emotions wonderful flow.......... :)

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Aung Si 29 October 2012

Would you like to create stunning poesy? Even machismo murmurs, 'Sedate Peri! ' Nib will penetrate cells of cute skin. All you need is just call me Darling. You are the poet.So u should try again to win her love with your breathing verses.Right?

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Babatunde Aremu 26 October 2012

Very romantic. You need to do more to maintain love. Good poem and thanks for sharing

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