Saturday, June 1, 2013

That Man I Once Knew Comments

Rating: 3.5

After forgetting for so long,
I am now starting to remember,
after the lines were drawn,
they've now been erased.
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Katherine Bryce
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Katherine Bryce 05 June 2013

Thank you, in all honesty, I wasn't too sure about repeating That man I once knew but I'm glad you think it made the poem stronger :)

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Paul Brookes 04 June 2013

A very well written poem I like the repeat of 'The man I once knew' very effective. A bitter sweet tale 10/10 BB : O)

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Katherine Bryce 01 June 2013

Thank you very much. :)

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Gajanan Mishra 01 June 2013

I remember who you are, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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