After forgetting for so long,
I am now starting to remember,
after the lines were drawn,
they've now been erased.
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A very well written poem I like the repeat of 'The man I once knew' very effective. A bitter sweet tale 10/10 BB : O)
I remember who you are, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
Thank you, in all honesty, I wasn't too sure about repeating That man I once knew but I'm glad you think it made the poem stronger :)