Wednesday, March 31, 2010

That Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who is that man forcing my stare?
Behind those dark brown eyes I should be.
No more than a name and no more to me.
There, I can simmer in our unspoken words.
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Raymond Wright 23 April 2010

I really love this one. Compact and graceful, and full of emotion. Well done! ~R

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