That Long Awaited Call Comments

So true on the writing of your poem. If only more would give their technologies a break and get with each other and nature.

Very true words. There is second chance for evey one.

I agree that too much time is wasted talking on mobile phones. I like to think that we will all be forgiven and get a second chance. The first line: Do you mean 'make amends? '

Nice one. Flows well to conclusion. That there is hope with some good old no holds barred straight talk