Monday, July 6, 2009

That Little Girl With Her Hands To The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.9

Have you ever clung to a desire for so long
that your eyes saw nothing else?
The most beautiful part of existence is the ability to dream,
to aspire toward a goal, no matter how lofty!
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Hunter Dasten
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Justice Clarke 02 October 2012

Lovely poem . I really enjoyed it's message and context

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Adeline Foster 30 December 2011

Nice thoughts in this pretty poem. Read mine - Plain Talk - Adeline

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Leah Ayliffe 30 January 2010

I love this poem if not only for the beautiful words, but for how much i can connect with it, i continue to reach for the stars, the sky everyday Love It!

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 30 January 2010

I like this poem.I bet most of us can relate to 'that little girl with her hands to the sky'. good write

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Concetta Neville 29 January 2010

This poem brought tears to my eyes. this girl reminds me of myself when I was young. Sometimes I wish I could be that little girl again. Can't wait to read more of your work.10++++++++

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Karina The Cat 28 January 2010

I Like This One ^.^ - karina

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this is really pretty. i cld see the little girl, she was blonde wit big blue eyes and a dress. lolz. nice picture, keep writing.

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Twiggy Tubercio 12 August 2009

perfect in every way, wonderful picture, so vivid, i relate to more levels than one could fathom, thank you for this piece

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Ben Gieske 11 August 2009

You paint a beautiful image with The little girl with her hands to the sky, and I like this part tomorrow is another day. Her arms will be one day longer, and the stars will still be there

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Nikunj Sharma 09 July 2009

yes her dream shall not tear.........this is full of hope and aspiration. it encourages one to dream and soar... pls read my poem called MY DREAM and LETS DREAM

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Howard Kern 07 July 2009

' and a child shall lead them ' Spritiual, Holy, and above all 'truth' You feel the magic of a holy spirit.Keep the faith and the qualiity work my highest ratng10+++

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Patrick McFarland 06 July 2009

Wow. Very enjoyable. Inspires the heart. Youth is fleeting and all too quickly we forget the wonders of childhood. Thanks for the reminder.

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