Sunday, March 9, 2008

That Light - That Sound Comments

Rating: 4.5

'I've noticed that light before, ' she said,
'In the pale of the dawn
In a passing storm,
In the eyes of a child having fun;
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David Lewis Paget
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Ann Beard 10 March 2008

This poem feels so right it just rolls off the tongue. I like your work. Regards Ann

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Ernestine Northover 10 March 2008

This is a lovely poem David, I could see the light and hear the tinkle so clearly. Delicious read. Love Ernestine XXX

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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