Friday, June 26, 2015

That Life This Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lost boyhood and the lost teen age,
Roaming on a bicycle in a small town,
That wasn’t completely electrified,
Windy evenings of summer vacation,
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Khalida Bano Ali 19 July 2015

A beautiful poem comparing the past life and the present life.

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Valsa George 27 June 2015

We elders have a nostalgic longing for the by gone past! That's quite natural! From the poem I can understand how boisterous you were in your younger days! There was love and romance in the air with no heavy botheration of life! Like a free bird, you could sleep in the open air! The thought of the very fun of it makes me envious of you men folks! Really enjoyed the poem! A 10

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Khalid Saifullah 26 June 2015

A nice comparison of two lives..................10

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