Saturday, May 16, 2009

That Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

that kiss
i would'nt forget
amidst our sleeping kids
under the covered bed sheet
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

A nice composition, the idea is wonderful.

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Miriam Maia Padua 26 May 2009

This a very good write Sam... really good...lovely God will be happy reading this.. very touching written with all sincerity..i can feel it with innocence... God is forever with us... 10+++++ i love this piece Sam.. _maia_

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