love dwells
in his eyes
not on any other
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It is a beautiful poem on love and life having touching expression and nice collocation. Most impressive lines are.....but because he is blind whenever you leave him behind Thanks for sharing.
That kind- -probably a great % of men- -should be called self-lovers, they are true only to their own gratification and scoreboard. That is sad- -they lose out that way because their wife will leave them- -spiritually and emotionally if not physically. And if loved right, women could make men feel that heaven is on earth. Unfortunately, a larger % of women seem to be that kind of lover themselves these days. Well written poem.
That's true. I admit that this poem is just a way of picturing something the it so common. And you are right that 'if loved right' men/women will be at their very best. Thank you for commenting on this poem, Susan.