That Is You Comments

Well written and interesting write. How we see ourselves or others...always never the same. Growing, changing, never the same. Wondering and hoping always for the better, or have we arrived at who we have finally become.

a visual treat! ! 'the lily throws herself wide open the eaglet spreads unsteady wings the moistened foal first stumbles, then rises the splitting cocoon Rainbow wings spreading' its indeed very graphic.. n da lines 'Echoes in the caverns Of memories'- indeed very striking! ! an amazing poem.. :) regards asma...

I bet you get a lot of inspiration where you are now. This is again so far above the ordinary, wonderful job. H

well kelly you have made the journey from when i first knew you to being a good poet to being a brilliant poet and i have had the priviledge of seeing you evolve Warm regards allan

true enough. transformations are rarely easily earned. lovely. lovely. lovely.

That's brilliant Mr. Vinal... it seems very close to you (and to so many of us) . Lyla

Kelly, transformations are difficult and unavoidable. Once this process has been accepted, the beauty of it all seems less traumatic. I like this poem very much. Thanks.

Very nice...very touching!