Wednesday, May 18, 2016

That Is No More In Secret. Chorus To A Song Comments

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near the river we go for a walk
from sunrise till the evening.
tell me about your love
that is no more in secret.
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Liza Sud
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Daniel Brick 19 May 2016

WOW! This quatrain is so tender and truthful I hesitate to say anything because my words might disrupt the lovely mood of intimacy and sharing. But this experience of a perfect moment of rapport with a loved one is so wonderful and desirable I must call out my joy in experiencing it second-hand, as an observer not a participant.This is the union of true love in which lovers can say that marvelous paradox: I am You, and You are Me.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 18 May 2016

Is it possible to finish telling even from sunrise till the evening, I wonder. Love, which is no more a secret is such, both will have to meet again and again. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 May 2016

Together in love! Thanks for sharing.

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