Wednesday, April 29, 2009

**that Is My Love Comments

Rating: 2.9

I paused for a while to slow down
The strum of life in blues my first
The strings shrieked as the music
Played with my bleeding thumb
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Anjali Sinha 12 May 2009

What is thy love yes whats thy love? why didst thou pause could thou not see the look in my eyes could thou not smell that whiff of jasmine could thou not hear that song of love those gentle streams poured forth from that lyre Thy tips of fingers did bleed and blend with mine but only to taste that heaven called love. Slow thy hemlock Nay, see the reality My name came from heavens A gift from the gods Cry out louder and louder A shrill to many A whisper to my ears Cry out to me maybe a nightmare to many ill hear thee in the wilderness See, that’s my love yeeeeeeeeeee Sadiq lovely as always you make me write all this +++++10 anjali

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Reshma Ramesh 10 May 2009

beautiful.....................

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

ur love is amazing and beautiful..lovely poem

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