Tuesday, June 23, 2009

That Hour Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clock ticks and hits the hardest hour.
Sending the butterflies fluttering rapidly.
Look to that little bird on your shoulder.
Is it that time?
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Cecilia Skopec
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I love the end! And ''It is so uncomfortable that the crickets refuse to chirp.'' It just adds like something that I guess everyone can relate to or something. I don't know, but I love it! And I love the title! Very well done poem!

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Cecilia Skopec

Cecilia Skopec

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