Wednesday, June 22, 2005

That Godforsaken Day Comments

Rating: 3.5

She was, for many moons,
the velvet cover of the portals
inside my heart, there was,
majestically, the grand aorta,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Allan James Saywell 22 June 2005

you are talking of a broken heart Herbert and what happens to the modern heart as looked at by a doctor it gives me a new way of looking at things i hope the young ones can understand it it hasn't got those little four letter words in it like sook book and other things well done Herbert Warm regards allan

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 22 June 2005

I loved this one Herbert.Nice use of technical terms. Very touching.Thank you.

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